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Tuesday, July 12th 2005

9:27 AM

Tranquility

                                                 

                                                    Tranquility

                                             As I sit in my house,

I look out the dining room window

I can see the children outside playing 

without a care in the world.

I see a light breeze rustling the 

 leaves of a tree ever so softly.

All is well and peaceful.

At this moment all my thoughts are pleasant.

Two birds fly by,

free to go where ever their wings take them.

Nature is so beautiful.

Blue sky with fluffy white clouds,

Green trees, some with colorful fruit.

Off in the distance I see flowers

in different sizes and colors,

I can almost smell their sweet scent.

The day is turning to evening,

the children are coming in.

Its time to end these words now,

let my night with them begin.

By,

Cheryl Pachai

                                                      3-26-03

5 total marks.

Posted by Emalie Sherry:

This is an absolutely great poem! Your poems allow the reader to feel and picture what is being written. Keep it up!
Tuesday, July 12th 2005 @ 10:36 AM

Posted by Cat:

It's awesome, a very peaceful poem letting everyone know all is well. I love the construction and all that.
Wednesday, July 13th 2005 @ 8:16 AM

Posted by oink:

I love it!! Just Love it!!! It a wonderful poem!
Thursday, July 14th 2005 @ 6:52 PM

Posted by lakieta:

emile it is a good poem i like it
Wednesday, July 20th 2005 @ 3:06 PM

Posted by lakieta:

hey i like your poem it cool you keep writeing it good :)
Sunday, August 6th 2006 @ 6:23 PM

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